Waiting…
Anticipating the imminent void,
The space that will appear in the world
All too soon, where she once sat.
For she’s both here and not here now;
A being on the cusp of being.
Missed before she’s left me.
An aged soul, with love in her eyes still.
I kiss her forehead gently,
A tear rolls from me to she,
And she leans towards me
Wagging her tail.
The Long Goodbye
12 Thursday Nov 2015
mikesteeden said:
Metaphors of this and that, specifics as well combined with true passion…I rather like this a lot
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sonmi upon the Cloud said:
Thank you Mike. It’s topical subject matter here on the Cloud, I’m glad you like it.
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Professor VJ Duke said:
That was great. Puppies are awesome.
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sonmi upon the Cloud said:
Thanks Professor, I’m pleased you liked the wee thing, they are great, even when they get very old they’re still a puppy in a loved one’s eyes methinks.
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Professor VJ Duke said:
Oh yes! I’ve got a 5 year old puppy.
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sonmi upon the Cloud said:
Good to hear. Much like the best of humans, they retain their youthful exuberance and joy all their lives. My puppy is sixteen and a half years old.
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Professor VJ Duke said:
Yes, that’s a young puppy, I say.
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Peter Schreiner said:
For you I offer, my most heart felt offerings.
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sonmi upon the Cloud said:
So kind of you Peter. I know that you know how hard these things are. x
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Peter Schreiner said:
It is a price we pay for love, a debt never paid in full.
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sonmi upon the Cloud said:
Yes. And worth every single moment of the heartache I believe.
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Hariod Brawn said:
Extremely poignant – as if being there. If I can leave the world with love in my eyes it will all have been worth it, no matter when it may occur. H ❤
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sonmi upon the Cloud said:
Yes, so true. Thank you Hariod, to inspire such love makes for special human beings too, such as yourself. ❤
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roughseasinthemed said:
Boooo! 😥
You’ve just reminded me of Pippa, and how hard it was is, there is never a right moment.
dashing off to wipe face
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sonmi upon the Cloud said:
I know, I thought of Pippa when I read it back. hugs her.
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Jessie Martinovic said:
‘…through a world of goodbyes’
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sonmi upon the Cloud said:
Beautiful Jessie. Thank you, the music reminds me of the Portishead album – Dummy, a huge favourite of mine.
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Hariod Brawn said:
It reminds me of Nina Simone singing ‘I put a spell on you’.
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megdekorne said:
Such a lovely soul , you , dear Sonmi ….hugs , megxxx
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sonmi upon the Cloud said:
Thank you meg, highly appreciated. hugs back.
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nobodyknowsjan said:
This is certainly sad. I really hate goodbyes.
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sonmi upon the Cloud said:
Yes. Me too Jan.
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Michael said:
Really beautiful, Sonmi. You’ve captured all of the varied emotions here for me. The way the moment is slipping away– the anticipation of loss… The most poignant for me is the wagging tail– the innocence that knows nothing of being on the cusp of being, and remains a cup overflowing, even to the end. It is so selfless and that is partly why I think the love of our canine friends is so profound. Because it asks so little, and yet is so abundant in return…
Michael
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sonmi upon the Cloud said:
Thank you so much for your comment Michael. The innocence is all with our beloved furry ones, innocent love, without guile. The relationship we have with them is so singular. I’m glad it is only I, not her also, who has that anticipation.
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