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“Life can only be understood backwards; but it must be lived forwards.” ― Søren Kierkegaard, “Study the past if you would define the future.” ― Confucius, Back then long time ago when grass was green, Brand spanking new, Every sha-la-la-la Every wo-o-wo-o still shines, Humour, Long ago and oh so far away, Many a moon ago, Men women and wildebeests in tights, Misty water-coloured mammaries, Once upon a rhyme, Poetry, So it goes., someone's giddy aunt, The Past The Present and The Future walked into a bar. It was tense., Those/thems were the days, Yore round
In a faraway land, umpteen moons ago,
Fishwives tongues set the world aglow;
Igniting with rumours a rife paradigm,
Peradventure apologue, once upon a time.
In the good old days, a fine yarn was told,
And a knitted knight’s stitch was terribly bold;
There were hearts in caskets covered in blisters,
Ill fated myths and tight-wearing misters.
And tomorrow was always another fine day;
Adam was a lad, and every parent did say,
‘They don’t make ‘em proper like that no more’,
At the top of our stairs, in the mourns of yore.
Way back when, ensconced in mystery,
Sits your dad’s heyday and its ancient history;
Over the rainbow, somewhere down memory lane,
We had nothing to lose, we had everything to gain.
We all knew the best was yet to come,
Though still flew way too close to the sun;
Now we’re wishing ‘pon stars, that never shall fall,
Knocking wood in a galaxy, not far away at all.
Where once were nought but dream strewn fields,
Wishing still helped, and lips were tight sealed;
And they all lived ever after, fossilised in prose,
For as a great man once said . . .
‘So it goes’.
I love this. Can I share?
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By the Gods and all medium sized dogs, you most certainly can Jim! Thank you, most appreciated. beams
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‘By the Gods and all medium sized dogs’ !!! 😀
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Hahahahahaha. That’s an old one of mine that pops up every now and again, I’m glad you picked up on it and it had you laughing, it still tickles me to this day!
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Well Esme,
“So it goes”,
Has up and went.
Those who paid out
Was money well spent.
The fossilized past
Truth conveniently bent.
Now we can rest
As if it were best.
Cheers.
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‘The fossilized past
Truth conveniently bent.’ – Nicely done Mr Sock. True enough as well. Thank you for your extra lines of verse, always a pleasure to see you upon the Cloud too.
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Gorgeously composed
I felt like I was at the center of the ocean, rocking gently in a perfectly constructed boat
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I really am chuffed to bits with that review Hyde.
Many thanks and welcome to my Cloud. – beams a large smile out
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Fantastic work, Esme! I was hooked by the bait dangled in the second line of the first stanza: “Fishwives tongues set the world aglow” — what a wonderfully defined pulse that has when set (as it is) against the first line’s comma-paused meter. It’s hard to express these things in words, perhaps, but right there at the head there’s magic in that juxtaposed pulsing. Poems — ‘they don’t make ‘em proper like that no more’; oh, but you do. Still, I suspect our dreams, ‘fossilised in prose’ still have some efficacy, no? Great work, Esme!
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Ooooh, I wondered what you’d make of it, and it turns out it’s very good news! Thank you, the beat is so vital in poetry (rhyming or not), so being told one has got it that right is a great achievement.
‘Still, I suspect our dreams, ‘fossilised in prose’ still have some efficacy, no?’ – Oh yes, I don’t see being fossilised in prose as a concrete overcoat laughs, more a definitive marking of existence, be it dreams, people, memories, or otherwise. Nostalgia is such a powerful feeling, and the more time each generation has to ponder this, plus the means to share said memories with each other, the stronger it gets. It is a comfort blanket nostalgia. I may have strayed from whatever the point I was making there, laughs.
Thank you so much for your words, ‘magic’, I couldn’t ask for more.
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” a knitted knight’s stitch” . . . clever girl. 🙂
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Thank you Carmen.
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Tiptoe Through the Tulips, perhaps? 😉
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Yes. Just like this!
I can’t hear that song now without seeing the scenes from the film (Insidious) play through my head too. It was creepy enough to start with hahahaha.
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Egads! Didn’t see that film – don’t think I want to!
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Indeed. ‘Tis beyond spooky. Cushion to hide your face material.
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“peradventure apologue” — a soothing word pair that. They go together like anima, animus and animal. Thanks for all your wondrous words, and the landscapes they inhabit 🙂
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Oh I’m glad you picked a favourite part Bill, I like the two side by side myself, they seem to fit just right. And you are most welcome, thank you in return for coming with me into the worlds from which they originate.
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Quite the lyrical journey though time in poetic pantameter. Gives me the feeling of endless continuity like a drumbeat, though of course each generation feels as though we are The Ones. (Frankly, I’m still convinced 😉 ). Stretch it out, pull it back (like the knitted knight’s stitches) and what have we here? Less innovation than invitation to join in the dance of creation for its own sake. At least that’s my takeaway 😉 Loved it, sweet. Love to you. ❤
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Yes! This – ‘the feeling of endless continuity like a drumbeat, though of course each generation feels as though we are The Ones.’ and this ‘Stretch it out, pull it back (like the knitted knight’s stitches) and what have we here? Less innovation than invitation to join in the dance of creation for its own sake.’ – nail on the head! A stitch in time as the wool unravels then pings back into shape. Your takeaway is spot on for the core of it.
Thank youy very muchly Bela. ❤
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Wow. Just …. wow.
The entire thing. Just… utterly enchanting, beguiling, … wow.
We all knew the best was yet to come,
Though still flew way too close to the sun;
Now we’re wishing ‘pon stars, that never shall fall,
Knocking wood in a galaxy, not far away at all.
Old Blue Eyes, Icarus, Wizard of Oz with Rainbows, and Star Wars! In one verse.
I stand in awe, madame. ✨
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And you got every reference too! I often find such connections when writing, and always let them stay and get settled into the poem/story, because it never fails to feel ‘right’. It means a great deal to me that someone would come along and have such a powerful reaction to my words, so I echo your ‘wows’ and thank you from the heart for telling me how much you enjoyed it so much. – curtsies, bows then falls over in her excitement
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A most enjoyable wig bubble.
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‘Wig bubble’ – Hahahahaha. Thank you. I think. I’ll have those words anyway picks them up and pops them into her apron pocket to examine more closely later on.
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http://www.airbrushmuseum.com/wig_bubbles.htm
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You were in my spam Ben, do forgive me, and thank you for link! All becomes clear, interesting stuff.
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He was both funny and wise.
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What a fascinating character he was!
http://www.superweirdsubstance.com/lord-buckley/
Esme thanking Ben for the introduction upon the Cloud
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Every moment changes depending on where we’re standing when we view it. Every time seems to carry all of time, and we orbit that succulent center, never arriving, always drawn, always remembering. A stable orbit is a perpetual free-fall, a never-ending descent, a return to the beginning that is no longer there…
Lovely as ever, Esme! I learned a few new words and I have to say, your use of tags continues to mystify and astound. I always feel I’m reading the footnotes to a cloud’s happy passage.
Michael
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And throughout it all, we are always, here, right now.- smiles
“Lovely as ever, Esme!” – Thank you Michael, so kind of you. I’m very low on energy, and editing the book of Clouds uses up what’s left of my few reserves most of the time, therefore I haven’t been able to visit other blogs much at all, so bear with me on your own fabulous offerings. – gives him a huge sticky bun with extra sprinkles on top I’m glad some folks still read the tags, they fly off down other paths, but are usually all connected to the main post. Unless it’s a song lyric I have going on a loop, or some random phrase that asked to be popped in.
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What a wonderful poem Esme. I certainly echo the others here in the feeling of being rocked gently by the meter here. I too had the feeling of being on a boat in the ocean. I think that analogy works very well here, because the vastness of time which you encapsulate here in your poem reminds me of the vastness of the ocean.
Your 4th and 5th stanzas were the ones that I liked the most. Some might read this and think you are talking about a never ending cyclical pattern and not see the progress that you also speak to here. However one cannot think of “So it goes” without processing movement in a direction. Whether that be the arrow of time or a slowly moving current. But the ocean analogy once again comes into play here, because as I reflected about this poem I also thought of how energy is transferred in an ocean wave, which is to move in a circle as the energy moves in a particular direction. Ocean waves are governed by both transverse and longitudinal energy transfer, and so while each individual particle seems to go no where, up and down, back and forth, yet things propagate. Sometimes slowly and gently and sometimes powerfully. In the story of humanity there is back and there is forth, there is up and there is down, and yet we do seem to move forward. Sometimes there are leaps, sometimes it crawls, but there is an overall direction.
As always Esme, your writing transports and immerses the reader in a journey that is elsewhere. It’s like a mini-vacation, and I thank you for the free trip. 🙂
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“Some might read this and think you are talking about a never ending cyclical pattern and not see the progress that you also speak to here” – Yes, it is both cyclic and forward moving, the song remains the same but the style and movement adapts and rolls on, and will do forever. I think your wave analogy is excellent, that forward heaving pulse, rhythmic, endless. There’s more to the poem than its first and second layer, but as is often the way with poetry, every reader will take that which they glean personally from their reading. Some see a ditty, some, well they don’t just see the crescent, they see the whole of the moon. Like you.
Thank you Swarn, hugely appreciated, bring your bucket and spade next time. x
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You are very welcome. 🙂
*Swarn buried in the sand with a big pair of sand boobies and occupying himself with a big grin.
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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