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And you ask "What if I fall?" Oh but my darling - What if you fly?” ― Erin Hanson, Autumn is a second spring when every leaf is a flower - Albert Camus, Autumn Sleeves, Designers want me to dress like Spring- in billowing things. I don't feel like Spring. I feel like a warm red Autumn - Marilyn Monroe, Humour, In one big breath!, Never a frown with Golden Brown, On a bare branch a crow is perched - autumn evening ― Bashō, Or maybe spring is the season of love and fall the season of mad lust. Spring for flirting but fall for the untamed delicious wild thing ― Elizabeth Cohen, Poetry, reddened cheeks, Rum, Seasons Jeff Beck, she loves the bare- the withered tree; she walks the sodden pasture lane - Robert Frost, she's a water..., Windy Miller
Sullied pale petals
Rust-edged with risk
Drift slow with intention —
Hem to fingers brisk
On coppery bottoms
Mounds swathed in detritus
Our fragile frames sheathed
Yet they never can right us
As Clouds of wild ochre
Fill blind thudding skies
And we peel off our bark
With shuddering sighs
Which then conker concerns
With delectable spikes
A blustering whirlwind
Of vestments takes flight
Tumbling russet red foliage —
We’re some work of fire
Acorn becomes oak
As we harvest desire
There’s a fumbling and foraging
Amongst leaf bestrewn roots
As we slip through wild woodland
Disregarding our boots
And we meld into marl
On this crisp equinox
Trying vainly to hold up
Our pants and our socks
Chilled trysts holding wrists
Spark bonfires of delight
As we fiercely clutch fast
To our chests and nuts tight
Knee-deep in rouged leaves
Skirted loins they are hiked
To kingdoms yet to come
‘Fore the frost of age strikes
Then time in our eyes
Clocks this amber mandate
We must gather our bounty
Not yet hibernate
And the whole world’s ablaze —
A sky-rocketing feat
There’s no trick laid down here . . .
For this autumn’s a treat!
Excellent! We have a deciduous conifer here called the tamarack. It’s needles turn yellow and fall off approaching winter. Adds another dimension to the fall landscape as they grow mingling in the evergreens. Another nice piece here Esme! (crunching leaves beneath my boots)
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Thank you Jim, I’m very pleased you like it, beams broadly and I’ve been having a look at your trees too
Lovely!
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About 5% of the conifers here are tamarack. Unfortunately it is a highly usable product, good for construction—and makes great firewood. I won’t use it, but others go out of their way to find it. Sad tale as usual.
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Hot stuff! Heaven knows what you’ll come up with in the spring, when the sap’s rising. Seriously, I think this is a gorgeous idea, contrasting the calculated knowingness of human sexuality with its more raw and less mediated counterpart in nature. You’ve captured the risk/danger element of both with style, and which I suspect is there pervading the natural world’s sexual and procreative impulses as ubiquitously as it does the human sphere, if only in the preliminary (pre-coital) phases. And who knows, perhaps the plant world has parallel codifications for this interplay? John Zande was educating me on communication between plants recently, so why wouldn’t they have relatively sophisticated messaging in the sexual/reproductive arena? Adrenaline is certainly a factor before and during sexual intercourse. I like your little joke with the acorn and the oak. Great feel, Esme, a great feel to this one. Many congratulations.
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Hahahahaha. I know! You’ve translated the text (without a word from Esme I should add) so expertly, Hariod I can only nod in agreement and thank you with gusto! (Gusto waves from the rafters) There’s more an’ all . . . Esme’s ever pervading passion for the subject of time. More on that in my reply to Bela’s comment in a few . . . ticks.
‘I like your little joke with the acorn and the oak.’ – And I like your wee poem telling me so, hahahaha. That and the pants and socks line take an elegant piece and has me fingerpaint ‘By Esme age 431’ across it methinks.
Thank you!
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As crisp as sycamore shingles (the dark sheaves that fall and snap satisfyingly when bent), as color-fall as the leaves that take their leave, lose the heights, but glide earthward to join all ‘tother leaf-shaped patterns aquilt — not a square leaf among them, as the golden geometric curves and angles fit and count. Fibonaccial Fall 🙂
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Once again you rival my prose with your own Bill, beautiful, I’m particularly keen on this – ‘Fibonaccial Fall‘ – pockets it grinning
Thank you good sir!
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I sent an Autumnally attired scouting party to bot about the internets, to conduct a scavenger search. Their mission: find a meme for this 16 word excerpt:
Tumbling russet red foliage —
We’re some work of fire
Acorn becomes oak
As we harvest desire
The winning meme:
https://goo.gl/images/zDwhW9
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So it did and I see it on the list! I did the same and plumped for this one
https://i1.wp.com/diaphanouspress.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/10/Ecstasy-and-the-Pursuit-of-Excellence-DALE-HOUSTMAN.jpg?resize=798%2C1026&ssl=1
What an interesting idea Bill, I may employ it again at some point.
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Thank you for the juxtapositional anachronistically designed colorific collage, Esme. I bounced around diaphanouspress.com and found some delightful stuff to stuff in my Rücksack. There was yet a little room for stuffables, so I took the path marked “visual poetry” — something I’ve decided to call visual Poe try.
Found:
https://www.swomag.com/the-creator-of-visual-poetry-artist-anatol-knotek/
🙂 ❤ 🙂
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‘There was yet a little room for stuffables’ – Story of my life Bill. Hahahahaha. Thank you, sorry for the late curtain call, I’ve been floating, swanning about over the constellation of Cygnus, but here I am now.
Of that which you have linked after those lovely words I have decided I like bestest the last offering that has many options of word play. The Lone Line coulda won it, and I am a bit of a suckeroo for roses, but no, the last in line of all the lines I could pin to the milky way and study when drifting away again.
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Such rich goodness❣️ Thank you Esme.
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You’re very welcome, I’m glad to have sent such a thing your way in rich spoonfuls Val beams ❤
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There is a slight double entendre here that I hope I am picking up correctly. A lovely treatise about the season, Yes and without doubt. Though something else beguiles me in this uber- creative piece. If you say I am amiss, I will accept it with grace. Still, something in the background speaks to me here. Do tell if there is any revelation in the telling. 🤔😘
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‘There is a slight double entendre here that I hope I am picking up correctly.’ – A spot of it. A shade. A hint of a tint . . . in as much as . . . yes. laughs a lot You’re quite right there Bela, and as for more? Well, I am now adding a word to the title of my book thanks to your question, and that word is ‘Revelations’, for beyond the beauty of the scene, the splash of sauce and all that Hariod (so perfectly) spotted and translated, there is another layer to those falling leaves, those vestments lost — our mortality — subject as we are to temporality — all that we lose with age, all we are stripped of as the time in our eyes tocks forwards, so Esme is impelling us to seize the proverbial day, to grasp those nettles and fly with raw abandon (or sauteed, flaming hot!), dance as the the leaves do with pure pleasure — all in the moment, ‘fore the frost of age strikes’ and renders us incapable, and ultimately dead as a doornail. That’s Autumn in an acorn shell for me. Most associate Spring with passion as the sap rises (as H said), but Autumn has crimson passion claimed as its own. nods
Very well spotted Bela. You and Hariod are on the money, honey, thank you in spades for your comment ❤
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So what you’re saying is, grasp the oak’s trunk firmly before it turns back into an acorn, yes?
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https://media.women.com/images/images/000/019/504/large/tumblr_nveciu5bPU1r2igm4o3_500.gif?1461281211
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Yes. This. Thanks for the clarification, sweet. Good luck with your book! ❤
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Good, thank you Bela. It’s going to be very limited in editions, but real purdy beams ❤
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Kiss back, sweet.
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A wonderful tribute to autumn Esme! Although every season has it’s share of wonderful imagery there is something more deeply introspective about fall that I think draws many people I know to feel it is their favorite season. If the year were a day, I think autumn would be our evening…we are not yet ready for winter’s sleep but have a whole day to reflect on. What you’ve captured so well here is that in that in-between time before sleep and after our days work is a desire to live life to the fullest and soak up all that is left before it is time to close one’s eyes. While I think the autumn is wonderfully introspective, when time is short we also can’t lose sight of the moment.
Fall here has not been terribly pretty, unfortunately. We went from early September to November weather in the span of a few days. I joked on twitter about “the day of fall we had was nice”. lol The leaves are quickly going from green to withered and fallen. 😦
If you have the time you can read my ode to autumn. It was written before I found Esme, so naturally wasn’t as good as it could be since I met my muse upon the clouds. lol
https://cloakunfurled.com/2015/10/10/my-ode-to-autumn/
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Yes I agree, Autumn is our sunset, our early evening glow and the perfect setting for as much of a last hurrah as we can muster – nods
Thank you for your words telling me so, and that you think it wonderful, boosting stuff that fires the exact same as the poem speaks of.
Your own poem – just in case folks don’t do links, here’s the last, most awesome verse…
‘And in the longer night hours, silence sets in.
A light frost adheres to stubborn leaves,
Who cling to their branches, refusing to face,
The inevitability that all life must meet its end,
And that all we can do is hope we lived well,
So a better world begins in winter’s wake.’
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Thank you Esme for quoting that bit of poem here. I was particularly proud of that verse as well, so it’s always nice when someone, especially someone as talented a writer as yourself, feels the same way. 🙂
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Well deserved Swarn.
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