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All in one long breath - if you can, dimension bumps, Falling through time to the endless horizon, However far away, poem, Prosetry, That Then There What When Where? . . . Here
Ensnared . . . she gradually slowed to an oscitant still
Midst the streaming and teeming of crowds that did mill
As stiff sullen shoulders nudged her here then there
Still she did not feel slighted was quite unaware
Of slack lacklustre faces all looming and leering
In clustered society caroming and veering
Like blank bumper cars or automata humanity
Humping through life gripping fast-to-fade sanity
Yet none were perceived by her cool conscious mind
For off it had streamed to a place that just shined
Beyond traffic bleats mute and rough mutterings muffled
By crowds in retreat as oblivious to her they shuffled
Through mean megalopolis canopied with grey
Its ignoble leave drifting gently away
So the stale London air was around her no more
As blinking she stood upon a far distant shore
Where waters shimmered through words and soft phrases
And cherished sands stretched across watermarked pages
Turning laughter imparted in echoes long ago
Into islands of treasure beached as castaway cargo
Feeling warmth undiminished as the fire does still burn
And we all have our beaches perchance to return
As back to the city and onwards she goes
But her heart’s by the waves where the prose . . .
it just glows.
I like ☝🏻
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I like that you like (d) sir. Thank you.
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You’re welcome lady on the cloud ⛅️
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Hmmmm, Cloud.
So you are saying, eloquently Tubularsock may add, that she’s all wet?
Cheers.
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Eeeuuuwwwww. No, she’s just got one foot in the water and one on dry land.
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Of course, why didn’t Tubularsock think of that?
Another realization for your edification, Cloud. Opening an umbrella under water will NOT prevent one from getting wet.
Tubularsock has attempted this three times and was convinced Tubularsock was on to something until a former friend proved Tubularsock WRONG when the friend opened an umbrella under water in a submarine.
Another Tubularsock theory torpedoed!
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You are not the first to try –
However, the submarine trick is a groovy one, so long as no bad luck befalleth the crew.
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Oh THAT! Ahhh, that is why Tubularsock said a “former friend”.
Kind of proved that theory of opening an umbrella indoors Tubularsock guesses.
Yet it must not apply to umbrellas themselves. The umbrella was the ONLY thing that survived. Damn sad if you ask Tubularsock!
That could be the key.
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Beautiful. Who did you copy it from? 😁
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Be careful… You might pay me a compliment.
Esme Cloud popping Mr Pink’s water wings whilst thanking him
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Btw, I ran into a blog on WP which looks like it’s done by someone from your planet! I think you’d like him. Poetry, drawing etc. https://caliath.com/
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I followed your link only to find I already had his blog open on another page, so we are all on the same page there! My planet, hahahahaha, that’s good, and I do like him, yes, so thank you for giving me the nod Mr Pink.
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This is veritably soothing. It’s like pleating sensations of loftiness in folds of skin. For a cloud, you are humaner than most.
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‘It’s like pleating sensations of loftiness in folds of skin.‘ – I take this as an immense compliment João-Maria, thank you. I am only part-cloud, having ingested some after settling upon it so very long ago; I have given it a little humanity, it has given me the capacity to hear the sounds of the universe. Sometimes.
I prefer Clouds to humans for the most part. But then I think that’s true of many of us.
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Beautiful
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Thank you Mantha. ❤
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I enjoyed this poem enormously, dear esteemed cloud minder and chronicler of the finest fancies, fantasies, and fruitions. I’m also a fan of topographical maps, doncha know? Heart hearts too, doncha also know? Pomes and pomegranates as well. Here is a poet capturing pomes, poems, and pomegranates: https://www.poetryoutloud.org/poem/pome/
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I am a chronic chronicler. Someone said ‘It’s a need’ and I agree, and think it’s very like that pome idea you linked to, with the seeds, for every single one sets the foundations for the next and there’s always a next pome at some point, some appear quicker than others, but you end up with a forest, which is just what I have, a forest of pomes, poems and paper proses, of which some are blooming.
A map fan too hmm? The oldies are the best even if some think then no longer of use, they are, for they map a different world that was just as real as this one.
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Olde maps are like mental maps,

both may harbor dragons.
Fun for the language freakish too.
As well you can imagine.
🙂
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Ohhhh yes, we are our own atlases, this lass’s at last mapped (considers this and actually thinks there’s still some uncharted territory both of brain and outer bits and bobbins), I see your link, and raise you another
https://www.britishmuseum.org/collection/object/P_1851-0901-666
More on maps soon nods
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Wowser’s cowsers, a magical geographical depiction of “bum boats” (I have filed this marvelous descriptor under the letter B, for Besame Street).
LAND HO!
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For some reason I have neded up thinking of what should have been the fine vessel R.R.S. Boaty McBoatface – https://www.nytimes.com/2016/03/22/world/europe/boaty-mcboatface-what-you-get-when-you-let-the-internet-decide.html
A tremendous name disregarded despite huge public backing. It has been emplyed since mind you to appease the hoardes -https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Boaty_McBoatface
I think you’ll like the story Bill. smles
Esme upon Cloudy Mccloudface
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