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@muses, “I would especially like to recourt the Muse of poetry who ran off with the mailman four years ago and drops me only a scribbled postcard from time to time.” - John Updike, “O! for a muse of fire that would ascend the brightest heaven of invention.” - Will Shakey, Gliding in a starless sky Till we found the inner light Now we can duplicate the universe, spinning inspiration, That’s what you need, with fanfaronade
Well now, a brand new follower, in his first communication with esme and the Cloud has written a poem for her! And I quote – “When I started reading your blog, it was just like a breath of fresh air, and it inspired me to write this bad poem dedicated to your cause.” Dedication to the cause too! lets off several party poppers (It isn’t a bad poem at all, as you shall see.)
Inspiration is at the core of the Cloud, aiming to discover it through you lot… points at them all – this takes a fair bit of time as there are 180 of them at present (a hundred and eighty! – esme hyperventilates and pegs it behind the sofa for ten minutes to try and forget that many people are looking at her)…and offer it up too in handy sized chunks for you to take away and mould into whatever shape you fancy (still on about inspiration here not free Play Doh or anything).
Anyway, mine own trumpet and bumpet blowing aside, here it is. I have left out the last part of the verse, (which is my favourite part, though all parts are most fine and dandy (preffered the Beano actually but it sounds wrong)) so you must click through to his blog right HERE to get the whole piece . Click on I tell you! esme getting demanding and also bribing folks with sticky buns
Thank you Swarn, and welcome to the Cloud. – beams a large smile out at him.
Partly poetry with a chance of showers
A boring scientist enters,
One who knows clouds,
Beyond wisps and shapes,
Beyond layers and levels,
Past the undulating waves
That repeat but don’t repeat
Like a tessellation
That could only come from the hand of Escher himself
And should we be content enough to look up
Or look down,
If that beauty is enough
To tickle our imagination
Inspire our thoughts
Keep us floating above it all?
But a cloud is not just a cloud,
Let me take you in to see what you haven’t seen
Now we are at the top,
I know that’s very boring, but you know
Gravity and all
I didn’t make up the rules
If you’re cold that’s good…that’s normal
What you see might also make you shiver,
But I promise to deliver,
We’ll start with ice, isn’t it nice,
I threw in a bit of rhyme to keep you interested
We’ll throw in another rime later
Microscopic particles of dust want to be ice
They mimic it and vapor is only too happy to appreciate the effort
And water droplets formed from the warmth below
Have no choice but to form tiny crystals
Some are columns long and elegant
Some are dendritic prisms
Whose branches grow
Making ever so intricate patterns
In no hurry to make their descent
They insist on skittering and fluttering their way down
Photons refract their way through this hexagonal maze,
And sometimes they even say “halo”….er…”hello”
But I don’t just want to stay here
Or things will get too cirrus…er…serious
Before I have to be a gentleman and give you my coat,
Let’s move down
If your finding it hard to move down,
That’s the wind in your face
Clouds would like you to believe gravity isn’t the boss
Here in the middle we have at all
Right here you’re being pushed up,
Not too far away you can be pushed down
But let’s get to the heart of the matter
Here there are solids, liquids, and gas
And you’re looking a little frosty
That would be the rime I was telling you about earlier
It’s so beautiful it makes your heart melt,
But you won’t until we get further down
This is where it really gets amazing
There are trillions of droplets in this cloud
They are thawing and freezing, growing and shrinking
Now let’s watch the chase, squint your eyes
Bigger drops and crystals catch smaller ones

Coalescing, accreting, sticking
Millions of collisions each second
And the wind that blows up
Telling pellets and drops alike
“You aren’t done, you’ve got more to do,
I’ll not let gravity take you yet”
Hail embryos get aggressive,
Water droplets show patience
Can you feel the electric potential grow?
Let’s charge downwards and get out of the snow.
It feels a bit more tropical here,
Near the bottom of the troposphere,
Raindrops are big and ready to fall,
Eager to get away from it all,
Bloated drops fall and scatter to pieces,
As the speed of the updraft slowly increases
From one big drop you get ten,
Just to make its way down the cloud again,
Old drops leave, new drops form,
A wondrous, evolving, dynamic storm,
Look at those two, their picnic set,
They’re both about to get terribly wet…
This is such a happiness-making thing; I feel really elevated by Swarn’s kindness and generosity. How wonderful that a stranger (I assume he was that?) should be so considerate towards another, and make such sterling and thoughtful an effort – and a very fine one it is too. There’s been so much grim news of late, so this is really quite inspiring, and a very good reason to remind ourselves that people are essentially good, that harmony is a possibility. Well done Swarn, and many congratulations Esme, on your very well-deserved tribute. You’ve both made a little corner of Somerset dance between the raindrops. 🙂
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We are indeed strangers H, and I thought such effort put in by one who knows me not, to be uplifting too. beams – Thank you for your own lovely words here too, smiles abound like a relay baton from one to another. ❤ proof read and corrected by Hariod
esme enjoying sharing the smiles upon the Cloud.
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Not, ‘not to be uplifting’, but ‘knows me not, to be uplifting’. It’s not not that that I find commas inessential, nor is it not not that I find double negatives not transgressive, for you know me not to be too knottily pedantic about such matters, or is it that you know me not, to be pedantic about such matters? No, not not knowing me, for that would be incorrect, for you know you know me, do you not? H ❤
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Your proof-reading skills are as sharp as ever Hariod, and twud be fair to say, that I, often, either, use, too, many, of, the, buggers, or leave them out entirely when ideally there would be at least one or two shoved in there to break it all up and give pause for a breath or three whilst reading out-loud not that my readers will be doing that but I tend to read out-loud everything penned to see if it flows proper-like if you get me?
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And now that you’ve inserted one of the buggers, my knotty pedantry will seem all the more so to others’ eyes. N’er mind! After all, we make a colourful team, now that you are blue in the face, and me an increasingly reddish brown in my embarrassment. 🐻
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All is well H, I’ve credited you for your efforts on said comment.
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We definitely did not know each other, but we both knew clouds, so I don’t think that makes us strangers. Stranger than most perhaps…but not strangers to each other. 🙂
I am also in truth a huge fan of Cloud Atlas. It is a hugely powerful story to me, because I do believe that we do sow seeds in this life that we don’t know we are seeding, and that we never even see come to fruition. And that events that seem to have one meaning in the present, may have entirely different meanings in the future. The intersections of humans through time and space have a randomness that defies prediction and yet somehow forms patterns that lead to measurable results. The study of weather is very much the production of patterns out of that randomness and chaos.
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Everything is connected.
https://sonmicloud.wordpress.com/2015/02/08/the-world-still-turns/
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I come from meteorologist stock myself, Swarn, but no knowledge precipitated as a result. I like this Cloud though, and it’s my most favourite one of all. Aha, the Cloud Atlas link, I see; I really must get ’round to reading it one day, especially given your recommendation on top of Esme’s past and glowing own. Your seed theory chimes with me, though I don’t know if you’re suggesting some moral dimension to it, a sort of karmic thing – what say you? Anyway, what you did was really a very beautiful thing, and brought much light and happy smiles to my day. Good on you. 🙂
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Thank you Hariod. No mysticism implied, only mystery, which as a scientist I find to be a good thing. 🙂 In fact I found the message (I’ve only seen the movie) of the story to be fairly secular. There was no divine guidance to the events, just that passing down of inspiration, by people who never intended to inspire. 🙂
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Thank you for celebrating my poem and our introduction in this post. 🙂 It is much appreciate. Your commandments from the cloud, armed with sticky buns is a sight to behold. 🙂
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Hahahahaha. Yes I think it probably is a sight, one for sore eyes at times. – laughing a lot
You are most welcome. It had to be celebrated Swarn, when someone writes for you, or posts with you specifically in mind it’s a huge compliment, words are powerful wee things and those who love them are always welcome here, (unless they’re fat-head nazis, then not so much).
-esme pleased to have a cloud expert and another poet in her midst among the Cloud
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That was delightful! I think you’ll find that Swarn is a master wordsmith, himself, Esme. As I was reading through the poem, one of my little granddaughters was singing, “You are my Sunshine”. A perfect complement! 🙂
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It was a superb poem and yes, I know he is, all the more reason to be honoured Swarn likes little old esme’s efforts!
Thank you for the above carmen, I’ll now be singing that song myself all day – beams.
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I’m betting you can do more than caterwaul up there on that cloud of yours. 🙂
My husband loves to sing but has a difficult time carrying a tune. I like to say that what he lacks in ability, he makes up for in enthusiasm. .. Ha, ha!
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Actually, I did a guest appearance in The Fifth Gig and that went down pretty well.
Everyone should sing, it lightens the souls and lets you escape all that is dragging you down by the heels, so good on your husband – grins – Dancing is the same, people should just chuck themselves about if they think they don’t know how to dance, they’ll have a ball of a time!
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Oh my oh my ….dancing with you all , muses in the sky …..sending love
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Thank you meg, it is returned with interest (no funny business), in a brown paper parcel tied with ink-stained fingers. – smiles broadly
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Wow! Clicking through now ….
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Thanks J.B, I hope you enjoyed Swarn’s poem – smiles
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