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“I dip my pen in the blackest ink because I'm not afraid of falling into my inkpot.” Ralph Waldo Emerson, “Reality is only a Rorschach ink-blot, “Sometimes my feelings are so hot that I have to take the pen and put them out on paper to keep them from setting me afire inside; then all that ink and labor are wasted because I can't print the re, “Write till your ink be dry and with your tears moist it again- and frame some feeling that may discover such integrity.” - William Shakespeare, Blottered, Ink runs from the corners of my mouth. There is no happiness like mine. I have been eating poetry., She does not understand. When I get on my knees and lick her hand, Slinky rinky dinky ink, Texterous stuff, the inkling in the detail, To see the birth of all that isn't now, you know.” - Alan Watts
The parcel was wrapped
In exquisite dried pulp,
A thousand scraps of texts
With their arms around each other;
Obscured, fighting for air
And space.
A ribbon, detached
From a 1950s typewriter,
Neatly tied into a sloppy,
Floppy bow.
Fingers grew muddied with ink
As purchase was gained
On the stiff knot.
The sides were carefully smoothed
With short, museful strokes.
In the middle lay a word,
Ghosts of rusting
Keys from said writer of type,
Secured by copper wire, old string
Threaded carefully
Through skeletal spokes.
She looked around.
The walls were full of nouns;
Similes bulged in her pockets;
Even the carpet was littered,
With agile adjectives.
But this was a special word.
One devised just for her,
That no one ever
Had seen in the history
Of from here to there,
Then back again.
And he’d created it just
For her eyes to see,
Her hands to feel,
Her ears to hear,
Her senses to
Revel in.
She nibbled the edge of the word
Thoughtfully, and found herself
To be the happiest,
Inkiest girl
In the whole,
Wide . . .
Word.
Something deliciously haunting about this poem. Super stuff.
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Thank you Mike, I’m honoured you think so, and also that you see that side to it as well.
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I think it’s brilliant, Esme! Love it!
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Thank you Carmen! Highly chuffed you do!
Esme waving inky hands at Carmen upon the Cloud
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That’s as pretty as a picture. How fun it must be to be you!
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Ha! It is quite fun, I hadn’t pondered the fun of being me-es-me, but it’s quite ticklesome actually. I’m glad your here to join in with the fun Jim! Pretty as a picture is a fine compliment, Thank you with vim.
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Well off the beaten track.
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That suits me more than a little Ben. Thank you.
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I have kind of figured that out. 🙂
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A wonderful poem Esme. As always the imagery you invoke is superb. What this made me think of is the idea of less being more. As is often the case in writing (my forever Achilles heel) good writing isn’t always about how many words are used, but rather the right ones. And that sometimes, as is often the case in poetry, the thoughts and emotions connected to a word can make us feel more sated than having meaning spelled out for us. Good writing, it seems to me, is the kind that gives you directions but still giving you the sense that you got their on your own. There is a sense of freedom for the reader in good writing. One delicious word can set us on an emotion-filled journey. This is always your writing to me. Because no matter where you transport me too, I always feel like there is far more there than what you have written. 🙂
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Less is more eh? It’s very true with almost every kind of wordage I’d say. I suppose a good Haiku would be an example, but I don’t write much in the way of those because you can’t use enough words. falls about. No, but seriously I do think in order to hold a reader you need to get your point across, or set a truly believable scene in their minds with as few words as possible. That said I have story which is 13,000 words long, however it needs a really good cull in parts. There’s nothing wrong with starting big, but it does pay to whittle down, or in poetry specifically, bear in mind that ‘less is more’ adage. People rarely stick with stonking great poems of epic length.
Of course it helps if you make it up as you go along and no-one knows what the hell you’re on about.
‘There is a sense of freedom for the reader in good writing. One delicious word can set us on an emotion-filled journey. This is always your writing to me. Because no matter where you transport me too, I always feel like there is far more there than what you have written.’ – I am both thrilled and honoured to have you say so.
A wonderful and most appreciated comment dear Swarn, thank you. – bows deeply and follows with a curtsy
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Mmmm, so Darling… I see you received my parcel to you. (warm glowing smirk for Lady Esméralda)
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Gadzooks.
Ye Gads even.
There’s no parcel folks.
* takes the Prof gently by the ankles and throws him swiftly to the naughty step where he shall remain until supper*.
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Oh. Am I suffering again from my delusions of Esme+Professor in vivid grandeur? (with a most innocent face)
P.S. Seriously, the Lady is absolutely correct; no parcel. Only this exquisite poem from her wonderous heart and mind… and a baffoon who adores her. (wink)
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You are sir, but being adored does take the edge off it. Hahahahaha. Saying the poem is ‘this exquisite poem from her wondrous heart and mind’ helps too.
Thank you Professor. x
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Always a sublime pleasure, Esme, to see you have your way with the words. We’ve all got these words at our disposal, but that’s not enough is it…? It’s the revelation of that little something extra, the Esme of it all, that makes the words so very tasty…
Michael
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Tasty. Yum! Hahahaha, thank you Michael, I’m chuffed as always to hear your thoughts on the words that are transmitted to esme and out of her again.
Your book is second to next in line, I haven’t forgotten Seth Fried, I’ll let you know how I find him, when I do. smiles
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The dangers of LSD 😀
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Well, you should know darling.
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Aaah this is beautiful ❤
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Why thank you Shruti! I’m so pleased you enjoyed it.
Welcome to The Cloud – beams a large smile out
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Accepts the biscuits and tea and requests Esme to sit and have some biscuits and tea as well.
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Esme Cloud pours two big mugs and dunks a biscuit into her tea happily
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Thanks esme, Your poem is such a gentle gift — wrapped in a world of words and graced with a red and black bow. I’m a pica person myself, the particular kind of pica-picker who did peck a peck of papers, one skeleton key at a time on Underwood’s model. No electricity did it need, I could tap the paper along the platen by the light a burning string embedded in wax provided.
🙂 ❤ 🙂
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*esme kisses Bill, quiet-like, on the cheek, for such a wonderful comment.
Esme stressing tis all above board to the misses waving at them both from upon the Cloud ❤
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You have inspired our friends at WordPress.
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By the Gods of all sizes, they’ve nicked my idea! Mine isn’t some prompt business, tsk. Not that there’s anything wrong with a prompt, but the Cloud doesn’t work en masse in union so to speak.
esme tutting as she has tiffin with Clare upon the Cloud
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Playful. 😀
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I have my moments misses. winks
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You do indeed, little Esme. 😀
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So nice to visit your whole wide word.
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Thank you J.B, I’m really pleased you enjoy the span of it. – beams broadly
Esme who has the whole word in her hands, she has the whole wide word in her hands, so hear the word of The Cloud
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